Cover Letter Toolkit8
Step 3
Find Your Hook
STEP 3
Introduction
Your introduction must capture the reader’s interest and motivate them to continue reading your application. However, you should
keep it simple. Statements like:
Your company’s tremendously noble environmental solutions create a better world for all who live in it, and I would love
nothing more than to contribute my skills and knowledge to this worthy and honourable project.
will sound over the top to many employers. Also avoid the urge to disclose your childhood dreams to become an engineer since
you were four years old, unless it directly relates to the company or the position you are applying for (perhaps your mom worked
for the company and you have good memories of it, or you grew up close to a construction site, or your took apart your family’s
toaster by the age of six and put it back together in no time), you are better o using these strategies:
• Leverage any personal contacts you may have within the company, but first, ask for their permission; or mention a
conversation you had with an employer during a networking event, and in this instance, you should address your cover
letter to the person you met.
• Mention any personal interactions you have had with the company; maybe you used their products, or you are living in a
building designed by them. Describe how these interactions have motivated you to apply for the job.
• Show that you have specific knowledge about and interest in the organization. You can impress an employer by
demonstrating that you have taken the time to research the company. What is the recent news about this employer or
their new projects?
• What caught your attention in the job posting? Do have specific skills the employer is looking for? You can mention it
in your introduction and provide an example on your second paragraph.
Sample Opening Paragraphs:
It was a pleasure to meet you last Thursday at UBC’s Career Fair and I am very excited about the possibility of joining your team as
Electrical Engineering Assistant. After speaking with you, I learned a great deal about your organization and was particularly
interested in the new automation project your company has recently launched. As a second year electrical engineering student, I am
interested in the automation field and have developed skills in instrumentation and technical writing. Furthermore, I would bring to this
position curiosity, the ability to learn quickly, and flexibility.
I am following my desire to advance in mining process engineering by pursuing a Master of Engineering in Mining at UBC. I am
extremely interested to work for Costa Coal in the
Mining Internship Program. My two years of experience working as a Mining
Engineer in an open pit mine makes me a strong candidate. If given the opportunity, I’ll bring to this position not only enthusiasm, but
knowledge of design methods, estimates and RFPs.
The main reason I decided to pursue civil engineering was to develop a career that could make a dierence in the community, and I see
no place better than the City of Vancouver to apply what I have learned to make a positive impact. As an environmentally conscious
individual, I have always had an interest in green infrastructure, and I am excited to see the City of Vancouver achieve the Greenest
City Action Plan in the coming years. My passion and enthusiasm for transportation engineering, as well as my knowledge of technical
design and GIS software, will ensure that I am committed to the Active Transportation Engineering Assistant II position with the City .
In addition, I have two years of experience in customer service which has prepared me to eectively communicate with the public.